front page 05

I have changed the majority of my text, I have changed the text under the main article as it didn't particularly engage the audience. In order to create a sense of excitement on the front page I have done this by giving the reader information on the artists new album rather than their life as the magazine should predominantly priorities music. I have also moved the list of artists from the right hand side of the page to the bottom of the page, this has allowed me to place more engaging stories on the right and gives the reader more information on what the magazine will contain. As shown through my research, magazines that have included a list of artists names they all have some kind of divider between the different artists/bands. I have chosen to use a divider of a star in a blue colour as it doesn't take too much attention away from the artists names but clearly sets them apart from one another.

Another alteration I have made is add more text on the right hand side which includes stories to further engage the reader. I tried to use a range of artists in the stories in order to engage a wider number of audience members. I placed Ed Sheeran at the top of the list as he is currently highly seen in the media as he has recently released a new album. I have used a blue font for the artists names as it makes them more defined from the text underneath their names. I have also included another colour to my house style as my research has shown to have three house style colours, so my house style colours are: pick, blue and grey. But I have also included white and black in other places so that the three main house style colours are emphasised.